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Beside You Tomorrow

We'll always be side by side,
Holding hands on sidewalks,
Walking on the fallen leaves,
Under blue skies that tint pink.

Sitting on a bench by the trees,
Watching the sun descend slowly,
The sky's many shades of beauty,
But still not as beautiful as you.

My head rested on your shoulder,
And your head gently on mine,
My arms holding you so close,
Wishing we could stay for all of time.

As the sun descends down past,
The shimmering ocean of blue,
Dark skies rise and stars light up,
And the moon light guides us home.

Holding my hand as we walk slow,
You stop and you face me,
We stare into each others eyes,
And you kiss me, so gently.

I close my eyes to soak it in,
Remembering each tingling sensation,
Your lips so tender upon mine,
The best feeling ever...

We smile and we walk, all the way home,
Through streetlights and headlights,
We skip and we laugh...
Every moment with you is a new paradise,
That I never want to leave.

All through the night,
We lay in bed
Thinking of each other,
Not able to sleep,
Because we're afraid to miss something.

Because a dream never will do,
Even if you're in my arms,
I want to spend every moment,
Awake, with you, with my breath taken.

You captivate me, with your ways,
Everything you do makes me smile,
I love you beyond legal limits,
More than you would ever know.

I love how you're always beside me,
And always holding my hand,
The way you intend to never let go,
And I love you. I always will.

Tomorrow, can we watch the sunset?
And walk beneath that shinning moon?
We could count the stars and swear,
That they could never equal our love.

Tomorrow, can we do everything?
Could we be together and hold each other?
Will you hold my hand, tomorrow?
I love you babe, let's be together tomorrow.

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  • x3chaoticxharmony
    October 1, 2007
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    ummm... will you marry me PLEASE! wow... how i wish... i wish all guys were like this..

    humph!


  • freebird88
    September 30, 2007

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    I love the feeling of desperation I got when I read this poem! I love the flow, and how it read smoothly. The imagery is stunning! Fantastic poem!

  • emma7386
    September 14, 2007

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    This flows perfectly and the image it creates is of one of the good loves!! a great write, keep it up!


  • SpydurPoet
    September 6, 2007

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    Wow. Sounds like love with the threat of drifting away, someone trying like hell to hold on. This was beautiful.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • Voodoo Eyes
    September 1, 2007

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    There is so much feeling in this poem. It seems like you just had to get something out of you, and put it in words. Very Nice

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