Pretty daffodils -
swaying in the breeze
your golden color
and innocent look
makes one feel happy at heart
it is a pleasure to see you dance –
in the green meadows,
and my heart whispers softly,
“Oh! I do wish always to stay
with daffodils!”
Please tell me what you think
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Sweet!
This is a cute poem - I enjoyed it!
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Very Good
You did a wonderful job here. I read it several times and it came alive for me. This has a pleasant flow and sounds fresh and breezy. It says a lot without much thought! The poem flows well and carries a main theme throughout.
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Pretty write, indeed
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lovely
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Good write. When the wind blows the daffodils are swaying that looks like they are happy. Daffodils are beautiful.
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