I borrowed this soul...
But half of it is missing.
Dare I search the crowded streets and broken sidewalks to find it?
I fear I can't...but I must.
The night was so cold, it nipped at the hole in my chest...
The hole that yearned to be whole again.
Then I smelled it...
A fragrance that tantalized and teased the blood that flowed like a broken dam...
And so I followed this alluring aroma.
Tasting its tiny dew drops of essence on the twilight's air.
And there you stood.
Simplicity in a world of complex visions and blaring neon lights.
My Heaven.
The open arms after a long journey.
The Rainbow at the end of my storm.
A door was opened in my incomplete heart...
it bid for you to enter.
But...why didn't you hear it?
You must not have heard it.
I fear my feet have rebel against me.
I stand dwindling in the way of last minute dinner shoppers,
primpering and preening prom beauty queens,
Blue tie, brief case, board meeting business men and women
and loving gazes of lovers locked in lingering lust.
I willed you with my mind to see me.
To hear the impatient beat of my heart.
To smell the alluring aroma that floated like a phathom through the air, and helped me to find you...
But you are trapped in oblivious thoughts...
Watching the world go by...
Searching with heavy laden eyes, a wounded heart and an incomplete soul...
For The other half that will finally make you whole...
A contest entry
- Secret admirer by Mykeee.
850 points, ended August 31, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In Search Of An AP Family by xTomorrowx.
600 points, ended October 3, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn that silver into gold pt II by whispernthedark.
400 points, ended February 9, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Kylaya V- I wanna be your AP pet bunny ^_^ hehe
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1st stanza, 3rd line should be "dare"
3rd stanza, 2nd line should be "blaring"
4th stanza, 5th line should be "rebelled"
last stanza, 3rd line should be "aroma" & "phantom"
This is a really good write, just a couple of spelling corrections need to be made. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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this is really good, i enjoyed reading it =)
but if you wish to be in the running for an award in this contest please place your username in the authors box along with which member of my AP family you'd like to be, that is what this contest was designed for after all, thanks for entering =) -
wow...... I love this poem... it was wonderful... very well written...
A door was opened in my incomplete heart...
it bid for you to enter.
But...why didn't you hear it?
You must not have heard it.
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eek! lol thank you! i'm glad you liked it. I was hoping that it wasn't a lemon lol. thanks for the applauds and...what else can i say! THANKS!
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Thank you much. i'm more than glad you liked it. And thank you for the silver, I will go now and shine it up in my little corner...lol great contest!
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My pleasure. It was well worth it. It snuck up on me at the end and it was a toss up between silver and gold. Great visual
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Ah that just makes me smile now lol. thanks again, and thank you for considering me for Gold.
May Your Muse Forever Inspire You...
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no problem
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