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[ The lies we told ]

The lies we told
Were lies for keeps
The lines we sold
To herd the sheep

Flitter, flutter
Fly away
Forget about
your yesterday

The soldier with
the empty eyes
looks down at you
but doesn't cry

Wilting willows
Weep with rage
Wondering with
The wild sage

um

yeah

i lost it.

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  • Seven Kinky
    October 2, 2007
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    LOL damn it. It sounded really good until the last three lines, wench. *shakes head* You have a knack for words. I'm curious to see where you'll go with this...if you pick it back up, that is. I hope you do, though. Just curious...but did you mean "WANDERING...with the wild sage?" Just seemed to fit better than "wondering". Love this either way.