Friends are those
who sit together
in the evening shadows
to share their joys
and sorrows!
Friends are those...........
who spend a part of life
for each other
caring in a way
of their own!
Friends are those
who pet and scold
show your mistake
to correct and repent!
Friends are those
who love you true
they brighten your life
with smiles like
glittering stars!
Friends are those
who walk along
with you in life
not leaving you alone
till death does them part!
Friends are those
..
who are just
like you!
Please tell me what you think
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I really enjoyed it, it was heart warming and beautiful. Make me think of my best friends. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Love
~Noor
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A lovely write. The true meanings of friendship.
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this is a good tribute to the true meaning of friendship. Good job.
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yes I think this captures what we would like to share with true friends. I think it would read better without the exclamation marks, it would give it a more natural flow to signify lasting friendship rather than the short, sharp shock of sudden acquaintance.
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I like the poem a lot
I'd just leave off with the ellipses. Very simple and honest, and yes, truly from the heart. It has a touch of elegance to it. I'm not sure about the last stanza; I mean, I like it as it is, with the exception of the square, but leaving off with those 3 lines I think I'd off center it like putting the next two lines farther out from the first, but still under it...do you know what I mean? -
HEAR HEAR! a tru definiton of a friend!
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the repetition got on my nerves by the fourth stanza.. but that's just my opinion. this could be a great song, good lyrics.
nice poem. well written.
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Good write.
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