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Seduced

Missing image
Eyes strummed ivory chords,
penetrating clammered chirps

Formulating E=MC2 in whispers,
energizing rhythmic explosion

Scented whispers entwine souls,
debunking taboo of opposing poles

Seducing mind in waves spiralling
beyond perimeters dare traveled

churning passions begat desire...

Love...  at first sight



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Prompt: FLOATING ON THE WHISPERS OF YOUR HEART

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  • Marctheman
    August 31, 2007
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    lol, that was very nice, i love the picture also, that is love at first sight.


  • poetryality silver member
    August 31, 2007

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    Mathematics, and love definitely have nature's blend in this clever writ. I am impressed by anyone who can use a mathematical equation in their poetry. This is uniquely written, and spins off the tongue effortlessly. Excellent!


    Much Love ♥

    Renee

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    August 31, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry in my contest!
    Good luck to you with it and thanks a
    lot for sharing this here!




    Jeremy0826

  • Amorous Arms
    August 31, 2007

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    okay. i dont understand it. but its written wonderfully. im just a lil on the slow side of understanding what your trying to say. but its still good. good luck in the contest =

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    August 31, 2007
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    Prompt: FLOATING ON THE WHISPERS OF YOUR HEART

  • Angel Wing Disease
    August 31, 2007

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    good luck in this contest.
    I'm sure that the words will just flow to you, my friend. :]


    xx.
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