when you hide your eyes-
afraid the world will see you
or you’ll see the world?
Author notes
Image #8- sunglasses
A contest entry
- The Avatar Haiku Contest by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended September 16, 2007, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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For some reason, AP isn't allowing me to post this avator with my comment to you...I've tried twice...??? Maybe it's the avatar itself, so I'll comment without including the image and see if it passes through...
I really like your interpretation of this avatar-image. Very thought-provoking in so few words. Thank you so much for this entry to the contest!
Jo

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theres a lot of meaning here, especially for a haiku. with such limited space, youve managed to pack in many possibilities for fascinating conclusions...
great work
love
rin
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good little twist on this.
I liked it a lot.
Now everytime I see someone wearing sunglasses..
I'm going to ask myself that very question.
Good write, and good luck in your contest.
xx.



