I dont really know if you've seen me staring,drooling, over you during band. [making me wish i was your trumpet] As gross that might sound its really true.
I still remember sixth grade when you first came...[i kind of though you were unattractive] And you were a total ass to me. But i got over it. Highschool hit and you blossomed [as did i, go puberty!] And i noticed something different, something i liked. In the beggining i swore you didnt like me and i could except that [i'm use to feeling that way, i'm kinda dorky] But its just the way you said my name, like there was hidden meaning.
I watch you from across the field wishing i was somewhere near soi could be closer! So I could get to know the real you[chances are slim and we both know why that is] Till something amazing happened! You looked at me with deep feeling. Something in your soft brown eyes let me know that you might like me too. And it got me thinking, i have a shot at someone that is perfect.
I wish i was like other girls who had the bravery to tell you, "Hey, I LIKE YOU!" but i have yet to free myself from my hidden shell and friends we will remain, until i gaze at you from across the band hall again.
Author notes
Howdy! Im Dani The Great! [[fear me]]
And im in highschool marching band...and i have a crush on a couple of dudes...but i like THIS ONE more haha
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opt. 4!
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Thank you for entering,
This is rather.. good.
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There was a couple spelling errors and such and it kind of had an immature tone. but it almost worked for the poem per se.
"But its just the way you said my name, like there was hidden meaning. "
cuteee.
Liked the ending too
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goodluck and thank you.
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awww so sweet... i hate not having the balls to tell someone i like them... i feel your pain... great write and thanks for entering. best of luck in the contest
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This was a cute write.
The shape of verse is a free-flowing, self-serving type. I like the random idea of just reading sometimes, and sometimes just writing like this for myself.
enjoyed.
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