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Climb Every Mountain

I will climb every mountain,
and I will dream every dream.
I will fly to the heavens,
and I  will live all my dreams.
I will call our Your name,
and rejoice to Your beauty.
And in those moments of prayer,
I will know You were there.

So take me with You,
and hold me close in Your arms.
Sway me in harmany,
To the songs that You sing.
And grace me with angels,
That sing all of Your songs.
As I will be happy,
Just to know You were there.

As I sit in Your wonder,
I dream of those days.
Where I sat in the water,
and dreamt of Your face.
Now that I stand here,
I know that You cared.
For now I am happy,
Just knowing You were there.

So take me with You,
and hold me close in Your arms.
Sway me in harmany,
To the songs that You sing.
And grace me with angels,
That sing all of Your songs.
As I will be happy,
Just to know You were there.


Author notes

A song I wrote to Glorify God.
Written September 19th, 2003

A contest entry

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  • love my jose luis
    November 19, 2007
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    I really like this poem, but in your third line of your second stanza, harmony is spelled wrong... Just thought you should know... You have some really strong feelings in this poem. I really like that. You did a great job in putting all of your emotions into words.
    ~Alix


  • Allure of a Rose
    October 21, 2007
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    Wow. Very nice... I like your idea of who your 'God' is. I feel the same way a lot of times.
    This was really fun to read, and really well done.
    At first I thought it'd be really cheesy, but it was quite touching.
    Nice job.

    Love and Kisses...

    -Allura


  • 7 Windows
    March 9, 2004
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    i love you for that too! o man! that's soo great!

    Good Luck and God Bless,
    /Meg