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I Am Calm. I am Rational.

I'm not alive
But I'm still breathing
You see me, but not the
Seething
Rotting Hole that was my heart
You hear my voice
But you don't notice the utter
Lack
Of
Life
Ignorant and blind
I believed
Every
Single
Lie

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  • LordTristan
    January 5, 2008
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    Gee, it makes me want to die. But thats nothing new is it?