I walk, you glide.
Down the heavily populated street. Cars drive by.
Our arms link as we stop at the lights.
The warm wind rushes around,
Our dresses press tight against our bodies.
You clink your bracelets against mine.
We laugh just because we can.
We watch others, giving each other glance,
Then giggle at the different ways of people.
The market now near,
We only have to look at each other to know what each is thinking.
Off come the thongs that are rubbing creating blisters.
Together arms still linked, we run towards the snow cone.
A spread of magical colours, rainbow in comparison.
Mix and match, this and that.
A treat to make us cool.
A day together, a day so rare.
But now together now, no less.
Together we share.
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This is an awesome poem. I liked some of the imagery. LOL Some things I need not have pictured. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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this is rathyer good very random a great display of a stream of conciousness great imagery and flow. what was your heartsongthat you were listening too?
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I don't quite get it either. Maybe you could explain?
Leslie -
this was cute and sweet
but i don't really get it...
something about sharing and togetherness?...
and the line "But now together now, no less."
is just...awkward
the flow is of a bit at times, but it is a sweet poem
thanks for entering and good luck
xxxx
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umm ok I am a little confused but I think the point is togetherness,a dn having someone to share time with, maybe about hookers no idea.
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I like it^^it's cute but doesn't quite flow right though it's still a great write, good luck
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aww that is cute. great write. good luck in my contest.
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