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My Best Buddy

~**~

guiding my inner illumination
listening to my tears
clearing them away
with the wind from his words
comforting my soul
with invisible hugs
kowing he will not judge me
no matter what.
even though we come from different worlds
and our time lines do not match up
he is my best friend
now that I have found him
I dont know what I would do with out him

~**~

















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This poem is dedicated to My Best Buddy Pure Thought

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  • penman gold member
    September 4, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. A thoughtful and touching poem. Congrats on the honorable mention.


  • Swan song gold member
    September 2, 2007

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    Very good well written and good word economy
    this is a very nice poem and I liked it dear very good


  • poorme
    August 31, 2007
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    I'll just bet he smiles when he reads this.Great job putting your feelings on paper.Hugs,Heather


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 30, 2007

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    well written and your friend shall truly enjoy hearing your words of pureness. It is sometimes rare to have such a golden friendship as such but still it is a blessing in disguise as the closeness is everlasting and when your angel is one of your bst friends then they can truly see what you have been thru. My guardian angel is one of my very dearest friends as well - one whom we're so close that I love him with every fiber of my being for my world would be empty without him in my life. Remember this quote ~ " Friends are kisses blown to us by Angels." many wishes and blessings always xxxx

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 30, 2007

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    Awwwww This is a very nice tribute im sure he will appericate it you are a very good writer indeed when i grow up I want to be just like you . Goodluck in the contest.


  • Angel Wing Disease
    August 30, 2007

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    differant - Different*

    I did like this poem.
    Works about best/good friends are always classics in my book.
    They are some with the most passion and love behind them.
    Well done!
    Good luck in your contest. :]


    xx.

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