Enraptured by the passion;
a fever that has melted us to the core.
Open to your possibilities;
the many that you conceal.
Blisters boil upon first touch
bursting with a rage that,
for all practical purposes,
will decimate us both.
The combustion point has been breached
all convictions cremated by your heat...
A contest entry
- Light My Fire ( 18 + Adult .... 10 lines) by Riftkin.
475 points, ended September 8, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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so burning hot here,
and I love how you took the prompt
and ran with it to get this one going for me
thank you very much -
sweeet heaven, i saw the title and said OMG im not going in i wont no i wont...and well here i am...great job. best of luck..
Tory
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