heaven’s tear drops fall
refreshing the parched pasture
another life waits
In a list
A contest entry
- Basho's echo by monkus.
950 points, ended September 19, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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think that the first line is a little weak in conjunction with the others, but an interesting pen. thanks
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What a wonderfully written haiku that beautifully describes the wonderous cycle of life. Great job on this one Susie.
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Wonderful haiku! And, as you know, haiku is my favorite form! Good luck in the contest!
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this is a cute haiku.
Hopefully you can come up with a cleaver title for it. =D
Well done, and good luck in your contest!
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Thank you you for reading my haiku-haiku do not have titles. The first line stands as one.
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