The rope is hanging from a tree
As it tightens around me
The burning sensation of regret
If only I could just forget
So tonight I'll end all the pain
Underneath this sky of rain
And as I'm taking my last breath
Thinking of all I've left
I wonder if you'd even care
To find out I won't ever be there
Please tell me what you think
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I enjoy the tempo of the poem, as you read. I really can envision a sorrowful being under a grey sky, and the sorrow...lovely piece! Lovely!
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i hope this is not a real story even though i have though about hanging myself i have done other things though and beleave me when you mess up you feel ever worse because then you want to kill yourself because you tryed to do it in the first place thanks for sharing and god bless you forever and always love a friend who cares dianna lee green also knowned as serenity lynn silvermoon. ps: if you ever need someone to talk to i am here
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