on the ancient bed
boundless pages of life’s book
Busho’s pen- lays rest
My Haiku/Senryŭ Poetry
In a list
A contest entry
- Basho's echo by monkus.
950 points, ended September 19, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice ...
Good job here. I'd have said "to" rest, but that's just the Editor in me.
I hope life is throwing you flowers instead of curves. The world is becoming more uncertain with each passing day.
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quite an interesting image. thanks for entry
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wtg Mal
You painted a very pretty and sort of "comforting" picture with that 'pen laid to rest". Best wishes in the contest and 
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reenie
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The master of haiku would have smiled at this one - beautiful haiku and with a wonderful spiritual touch.
~ Nicolette
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I hear it...
loud and clear,very nice Haiku to smile about
thanks for sharing,SH
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Oh, this is very beautiful. A worthy haiku of the illustrious one, full of images like the master himself.
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