She's biting her tongue
Running away from
Trying to pretend
Coordinating words
All over again
A consequence in the back room
Of the mind
Scratching the walls
There's got to be something underneath
It's not like he's there
I'm not really scared
But it's just a reminder of the past
Ghostly replies from the
Bottom of the glass
Yielding questionable accesses
And falling down stairs
We are the ultimate retreats
To the depart of a stare
An etiquette dance
A bow and kiss
Though intercepted
I resist
With that done on honored strings
Where shields were kept
For victory's keys
I have submerged in a joker's glare
Kept in a jar, but thrown everywhere
Knocking down the thousands of pipes
Stacked with care
Yet existing only in my mind
(Does it all only exist there?)
The questions I must ask myself
Too deep to be replied
To keep me satisfied
Hitchhiker on the road
These are things tossed aside
In a minute you will fail again
You'll just speak to me
Like a friend
I will suffocate by myself
In the words I doubt
And nothing else…
Author notes
UHHHHHH...well the beginning was from a while ago, I just never finished it. So I decided that I would. And I did. Now I feel weird...
I'm not usually this pessimistic...at least i dont think :)
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The form makes it feel almost like a rant of sorts, but it does seem to capture the confusion and pain of the emotions and the mind. You always have such great, clever and unique lines that demand your attention, and make you think.
The End....wow, it's truly amazing and could stand alone even. I know of these things you write about in this ending! Awesome!
Outstanding, and, it's good to be pessimistic sometimes
Change of pace.
Michele
I shouldn't be on here, I should be doing homework *sigh*
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I admitt, I was ranting. Heh. Yeah I held my breath at the end though. Or let it out. Whichever. Pessimistic? Yes sometimes I suppose..AHHH...well today was exhausting. Well I should be taking a shower...
Thankkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
You.
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Very intense, strong situation feel to this. Great job.
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Yess well, thankyou
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