Passion engulfs me as I wait for you.
Doves fly above knowing our love.
The ocean breeze touches my skin and I shiver,
my love shall arrive.
Waiting in the shadows of the dancing sun,
my body yearns for him.
As I lie in wait the breeze sends the scent of my lover to me.
Beside me he rests,
I await our union.
We are eternal.
He brushes my breasts with his calloused fingertips.
My body arches towards his.
We finally unite and the world has dissappeared,
it is just him and I.
Thrusting into me we erupt together,
we are one.
Like the stars in the skies,
our love shines.
A contest entry
- I want to hold a quicky Pif as nobody has on up by Entwining Beauty.
400 points, ended September 1, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write something decent by Clockwork.
375 points, ended January 3, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I've seen the word love in poetry enough to get it by now. I don't really like this poem, because it's cliche.
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oh this is just beautiful good luck in the contest
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very tender
passionate and erotic.. excellent combination.. and this poem brings it together well.. excellent flow and imagery you can just picture this happening.. excellent write and good luck in the contest..
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