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Rape

I'm laying here,
in the blood on the floor.
Right under,
my broken door.
The bleeding stopped.
-BANG- -BANG-
Here comes more!
You ask me why I'm dead,
it's because she's a whore!

To my house,
is where she snuck.
She came for my homework,
to wish me luck.
What she really wanted,
was a nice good fuck.
She wanted my lips to kiss,
my penis to suck.
I was totally dumbstruck.

At the window,
she pulled down a drape.
The outside world watched,
as are the people with her tape.
As she fucked me,
our bodies did scrape.
After she was done,
she made her escape.
This can only be called "rape".

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I wasn't raped in real life, but I had this dream where a close friend did rape me. I know that it wasn't real, but it still affected me. It hurt, and I'm not too proud of it...even if it was a dream.

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  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    October 1, 2007

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    We all get embarassed and afraid when we have dreams like this. I have had COUNTLESS (and I mean countless) dreams that this has happened, or sexual assault, kidnap too - it's frightening. People get mixed up thinking guys are pussies for worrying about this and or that men can't be raped. Bollocks, it's a natural reaction for the penis to be stimulated from a woman touching it and if it's erect it can be put in. If it can be put in without permission IT IS RAPE. Don't feel ashamed, anyone can overpower anyone else, with the right tools and persuasions. Great emotive write!


  • Loveliesinsanity
    September 22, 2007

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    wow

    This is an amazing poem and trust me i understand a bout dreams that can seriously scare you i had a dream like that about a teacher that i had at the time so i was always really sketched out in his class