You can't fuck wit what you don't understand
so don't try an act like you's the man
cus if you come round my hood wit that slick shit
you bound to get hit wit -that steel
get rich boys that don't use toys
but pack up the heat -that slay you
n sell ya body as meat, I'm trynna eat
by sellin crack to minors from the police station to dinners
bout to make it in the big leagues
selling the fig leaves
and smokin the green shit to myself
packin up the lean shit on tha shelf
usin tha dead niggaz bodies as raw product for my profit
dont get mad when ya find out ya man's dead -instead -get off it
I told you talkin and walkin that slick shit
like you's someone special -is guranteeing a hit
and nigga I'm sending yo boys in front of a pastor
hittin em wit my nine just makes it a lil faster
so godbless you, cus you gon need jesus to forgive the sins you did
cus when me an my niggaz is done-all of yall is doin god's bid
Author notes
a slick lil rap I made a few days ago
Written January 16th, 2002
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needs rework
you are very byist and small minded i surely hope you dont call yourself a poet. to me that was the worst thing i have ever read, just becuase you think your hard or big doesn't mean you are. 'rich boy' don't blame them for your problems! -
excellent
why do you like to sell crack or is this a play on words to whats happening in society today? -
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i like it, but i idn't really understand the slang, but it was good. i love the part you put in about god, nice call.
~alisha~
read some of mine granted its not rap but just read! -
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......intregging....You all disappeard! What happen? i guess if u wanna say that was good u can...but i think it could be better..... but hey thats my personal opinion...
Edited on Nov 20, 10:05 p.m. because 'Cause i had too...'. -
This waas alright, not great language cus it's hard to understand, and it didn't flow as easy as my raps, but I like the rhymes, so i gotta say, it is pretty hot.
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