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I Care

Why don't you belive me?
You said all those hurtful words
I cried for days because of you
Saying I don't care
I have to think of me for once
So I left
What else did you want from me?
You have my money
There is no reason for me to live there
Who am I to you?
Am I just an endless piggy bank
No one understands me at all

You think I don't care
but I do
How dare you say that I don't
So now it's pay back time
For all the pain you caused
Now you die

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For my Father

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  • warrior-eagle
    October 15, 2007
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    wow.this was deep,full of anger and pain,and that makes it a great poem.

    ...Simply Me♥

  • angelbabybear
    August 30, 2007
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    deep...writing a poem about your own flesh and blood...makes you wanna think


  • Austere
    August 30, 2007
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    Awesome

    FULL OF ANGER. good write, sis.


  • Angel Wing Disease
    August 30, 2007

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    You said al those hurtful words - All* Small little typo

    I cryed for days because of you - Cried*

    Those were the only two that I found.
    This piece was VERY powerful..
    To write such a piece aimed at your own flesh and blood.. that takes guts.
    Good write, I liked this.


    xx.