Back-stabbing, bitching, petulant demands,
Piercings, tattoos and one night stands,
Drinks and drugs and boys and bands,
Friends forever, holding hands.
Late to bed, late to rise,
Denying what's before our eyes,
Guarding the truth with careful lies,
As our innocence dissolves and dies.
Drama, romance, sex and tears,
Sweet revelations, conquering fears,
Feigning interest as the future nears,
Give it up for our teenage years.
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This poem its powerful...ncie job
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I'd like to agree with the rest, it was excellent. Wonderfully written as well. Thank you for sharing!
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this was very good!! and very intresting!!
i loved it!!
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truly talented! love you
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hey, I went on Bex's bebo and found this bloody awesome piece, then went on your bebo to go WOW at you, but it didn't let me =[
soo...
WOW!
I fRikin love it! Tis aweosme ^_^
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Great
Bex sent me over here to read this using her persuasive methods of persuading
I really enjoyed it, it flows well and sums up the teenage years very well. And the rhyming didn't come across as forced, which is a rare thing these days with all the mediocre stuff I end up reading normally.
Second line - it's spelt 'piercings'. I'm a stickler for spelling, sorry
Thoroughly enjoyed it.
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thanks. glad you liked it. thanks for the spelling too, appreciate it xox
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WOAH NELLY!! I am completely speechless. This is liek the most amazing thing EVER. SERIOUSLY. I am so impressed right now, I can hardly type.
Just wow.
Wish I had something better to say.
WOW!!
xxx
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cheers. Glad you like. Isn't being a teenager plain awesome? xox
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