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tread on, don't falter

tread on, don't falter
though there seems no journey's end
don't let your dreams die

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  • monkus
    September 19, 2007

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    an interesting idea, but think the third line falls apart in zen tradition. but thank you for the entry and time


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    August 30, 2007

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    This is an excellent haiku/senryu based on the prompt Basho's echo. It is good enough to be my mantra of life--love it! Good luck in the contest!