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Bring On The Rain

I’m standing in the rain,
Not knowing what will come.
Please wash away my past regrets,
To live a life worth living,
Spend no more time debating.
I’m going to fight this world alone.
So I tell you,
Bring on the rain.

Bring on the rain,
Cause this world’s already full of pain.
Bring on the rain,
I’ll take it all on.
Bring on the rain,
Maybe it’ll hide these tears I've cried.

The clouds stick close,
And the thunder still roars.
But I will walk through it.
And drink it in.
Because I will live this life,
And wait on the flood.
Just go ahead,
Bring on the rain.

Bring on the rain,
Cause this world’s already full of pain.
Bring on the rain,
I’ll take it all on.
Bring on the rain,
There’s nothing more you can do to me.

I don’t mind getting wet,
I’ll make it through the storm.
Splash in the puddles,
And sing,
At the top of my lungs.
So bring on the rain.

Bring on the rain,
Cause this world’s already full of pain.
Bring on the rain,
I’ll take it all on.
Bring on the rain,
You will never wash away my soul!

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  • lavz0817
    March 9, 2008

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    Full of intense feeling!

    Greatly captures the essence of the human spirit who feels alone in the intensity of human suffering. This I believe is a fallacy of perception, yet a reality of the human emotional experience. Very well expressed!

  • Naraku No Hana
    December 10, 2007

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    wow this is such an amazing piece, Ro. Absolutely beautifully written and I love the repetitive line. IT isn't too much at all. IT's perfect!


  • W a s p
    September 22, 2007
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    IT...

    would make super lyrics, with just acoustic guitar backing, very folkie! Good write. WASP.


  • Lionsloves Lair
    September 10, 2007
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    Lionsloves Lair

    3 claps = 9 points


  • StarEyes
    September 5, 2007

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    I think this is about my favorite one from you so far! This is fantastic! When I think of rain, I think of "Rain Drop Kisses" A piece that I write on here a while back. This is fantastic! What a great job you did on this one!!!!!


  • J-Lee18m
    August 30, 2007
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    Great Job

    Sounds like a song. I really like it.

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