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Moli

Your beautiful, in more ways than there are words.
Your bright and happy, you never cry, even when you fall.
Yes sometimes there are paddies, cause you don't understand.
But I will be there to always hold your hand.
I explain as best I can for a two year old to grasp.

You are the sunshine and the rain,
I melt when I look at you again.... and again.
I cannot hide my pride nor would I want to.
Your amazing Moli and I love you so much.
We fit you and me, mother and daughter so beautifuly.
I make you giggle and you make me laugh,
I love it when we play in the bath.
I love your face when you learn a new word,
or when you see a plane that flys like a bird.

I worry for you everyday cause of the world that we live in,
Your a tender soul, so soft and sweet,
I often get scared of who you will meet.
I want to protect you and keep you safe,
but my job is to raise you to let you go.........

Thats gonna be hard.

But for now I enjoy every minuet we have,
playing silly games, blowing raspberries on your belly,
tickling your hands with bears around the garden.
You hang off my every word, but I do with you too.
Your amazing Moli and a gift to me,
Your as wonderful and awsome as anyone can be.

I love you angel...

ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND

Mummy xxx

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 1, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Your love really shines through here, very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest!


    • Ibius
      October 3, 2007
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      Thankyou so much. I really appreciate you stopping by and reading my poem.
      ~K~ x

  • Figaro
    October 1, 2007

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    I feel your love, and love her too through your eyes. What a gift this poem will be to her when she is older. Most definitely full of joy!


    • Ibius
      October 3, 2007
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      Aww thankyou for your lovelly comment, and for dropping by and reading it.
      I really do appreciate it.
      ~K~ x


  • Tam
    October 1, 2007

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    Awww....

    how sweet is this? I'm teared up!
    Your words are filled with so much love...only a heart that knows such beauty could pen this touching write.
    My day shall be more pleasant because I visited your world this morning...thank you.
    May butterflies find your landscape today...bringing smiles to you and Moli!
    Blessings! Tammy

    • Ibius
      October 3, 2007

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      Thankyou, I love your poems and your poetic comments too. I feel honoured that you would pass my way.
      Loving your work.
      ~K~ x


  • Spiritual Nature
    October 1, 2007

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    Filled with joy and unconditional love. You and your daughter are very blessed to have each other. Good luck in my contest. Thanks for sharing. Love, D


    • Ibius
      October 3, 2007
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      Thankyou so much for stopping by. I appreciate your comment.
      ~K~ x


  • daisybee
    September 2, 2007

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    Heart warming


    This was wonderful and straight from the heart-I am so happy that you have such an unconditional love in your life. I would be moved if it were from my mum.

    x


    • Ibius
      September 14, 2007
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      Aww thankyou so much for your comment. I really appreciate you finding the time to stop by ...
      ~K~


  • Nostalgia
    September 2, 2007
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    I would feel wonderful, beautiful write.......


    • Ibius
      September 14, 2007
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      Thankyou for your comment. I appreciate it.
      Many Thanks
      ~K~

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