With my trusty cape,
I'll fly from room to room.
In my underoos,
I'll save you from your doom.
Batman peeks out from behind,
Standing strong and proud.
With them snuggly in place,
My underoos make me stand out from the crowd.
My Mommy just laughs,
And Daddy shakes his head.
He says take your underoos,
And get yourself in bed.
So I'll go to sleep,
And know that I am safe.
Because my underoos,
Are underneath my cape!
A contest entry
- ~Shining Underwear~ by Teddibly Abnormal.
600 points, ended September 20, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Kids/innocence writes/prewrites =) by Hikari Lady.
2500 points, ended January 19, 22 entries
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Oh, how cute and lovely. I loved how you told it from a childs point of veiw. very intresting. Thanks for sharing.
Much love
~Noor -
haha that's so cute!!
i was like.. "didn't ask for a bed time story poem!" but that last stanza made all those thoughts go away. that's so cute!!
best of luck
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is so cute
makes me think of something really weird though....there is this guy i knew online and every once in awhile i would talk to him on messenger. occasionally he would invite me to view his webcam and on rare occasions when i would click on it, he would be sitting there talking to me with his tighty whities on his head, it was really weird, he said he did it to make me laugh, i though he was just plain weird though and after a few times, i quite talking to him altogether 
anyways, this was really cute and i wish you the best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Forgot clappy guys...
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Haha...adorable! Have you ever read Captain Underpants? They're great kid's books...but shhh...I still read them.
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i just love this piece. it reminds me of the many times that i used to do that as a kid. i used to love to dress up as superman and jump on my bed and the couch and whatever else would send me up into the air. you had me grinning from ear to ear with this one. great job hun.
Rob -
adorable! so glad to read an uplifting poem right now...
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