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Surrendered Totally

Capture for me, this moment in time
Capture it and make it mine
Give me the knowledge I'll need to cross over
To that realm of wonderA place joyously serene
A space without bounds that would hinder my being
That fullfilled person I am purposed to be
A submissive surrendered totally.

~Adorn me with wings perfectly sized
Watch as I take flight on the energy You provide
My life crystal shining brightly canvasses the skies
In that moment as I ascend to the heaven's above
You watching me, beaming proudly
As I grow in this newfound self love
Becoming that person I was purposed to be
Your submissive surrendered totally.

~Bred on years of self-denial and self doubt
Never fully understanding what that was about
Driven to search out the why's who's and how's
My life seemed a maze, no less amazing
Every turn a dead end, yetI sensed You there, holding tightly my hand
I purpose now to being for You all that I can
Your submissive surrendered totally.

~In truth let me walk, In trust let me soar
In giving my all to You, let me strive to give more
To You who has released me, You held the key
Unlocked in me power and possibilityRenewed strength now surges through once languid veinsA gift cherished forever, so forever I remain
Totally convinced I am now where God intended me
Your grateful and loving submissive, surrendered totally.

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  • Tattboyspet
    September 10, 2007

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    i can say no more other than touche and
    you have expressed a submissives emotions really well here - well done!

  • chardonnay
    August 30, 2007
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    I love this poem!

    I love the choice of words you used and that you can feel the emotion.

    This poem made me light up when i read it!

    Although i loved the poem, i did notice a few mistakes,
    ie,
    'once languid veinsA gift'
    should be 'once languid veins a gift'

    all the same great write, keep up the good work.

    love chardonnay