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The Eyes of Truth


 The Eyes of Truth

A theft you are a klepto's mistake, I can see what you've done,
every thing you will take.
So no one has seen and no one was shown, but your sin is as dirt,
your seeds have been sown.
Abusive you'll be your reason for rape, depressive, aggressive,
in no better shape.
Thought you were silent, they could'nt make any sound,
and neither will you when your deep in the ground.
Murder in thought excuses for killing,
I see how you are, the blood you've been spilling.
You think no one know's, and yet nothing said,
how wrong that you are, just wait till your dead.
SO keep up your guard, be well full and true,
the eyes of truth, will always be watching you.


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This is dedicated to the eyes of truth, the one with such, God himself.

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  • Tetris
    October 6, 2007

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    I like this one as well.

    Solid scheme, phrasing, and setup.

    More spelling errors, but like I said, that will come in time.


  • Tercil gold member
    September 2, 2007

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    This sounds like a regret, of one who is guilty of something they want to put right again. Rape is not necessaryly so, more a taking of ones civil liberties. that someone, religious or not is looking at you, nice thoughts

  • Animis Iss
    August 30, 2007
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    Thank you for taking a moment to read a peace of my work, I wish you well.


  • Raven2947
    August 30, 2007
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    Very well written and so true

  • Animis Iss
    August 30, 2007
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    I dedacate this with love to the eyes of truth, the only one with such, God him self.

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