There once was a girl from Tralee
Who loved wearing a tight sloggee
But sad a mad nit
Bit at her firm clit
And drowned in a swift rush of pee
A contest entry
- ~Shining Underwear~ by Teddibly Abnormal.
600 points, ended September 20, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hahah oh boy oh boy..... that last line gave me a fright. but thanks for entering it.
good luck
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ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm this is a really weird write, even considering the contest
anyways, best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Thanks, Lady, for passing by. I should really like to know how "weird". Is this on poetic or content lines? If you can be bothered please let me know.
Donald
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Oh wow, haha...that's a horrible thing to happen to a poor girl.
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poor girl.
that must have been so embarassing for her.
i mean, if all of this happened in public.
i pity her.
i wouldn't want to be on her shoes. no, i really won't.
but those things happen.
it's like my friend always say: "life sucks... and then you die."
hehehehehehe (i really didn't know what to say)
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