hopes and dreams
My heart is torn to pieces, they laugh, they point, they stare.
i didn't do anything to deserve this, it definitely isn't fair.
You tell them all your secrets, for them to only hear, but then the whole world knows it, it breaks me into tears.
I'm really sick of crying over nothing it seems, but to me its not nothing.
Breaking my hopes and dreams.
A contest entry
- Tired of Being Judged? by Heavens Child.
600 points, ended September 1, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really like this piece probably becuase I can relate to the feelings thanks for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest.
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I could feel your pain and sadness in these words. Often people have no idea how they're actions and words affects a person. Thank you for sharing and entering my contest.
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I know what that's like.
To have people just critisize and torment you for who you are.
Life is tough to live..
But you just gotta keep your head up, tell 'em to fuck off, and you live your life.
Never give up.
xx.
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