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Blue Jars

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I’ve spent my life burying dreams

in little glass coffins of cobalt blue

interning tiny shadows of fetuses

scratching their fingernails

against the slick sides of my mind

in a frenzied attempt to be born again

 

Each canopic jar 

hides its buried treasure

from the foreclosure

of all my worldly goods

tied up in escrow

 

Every night I take one out

of its royal blue sarcophagus

and air its silent cries 

in the deep lungs of the night

when the moon is sleeping

behind a thick wooly blanket

and the wind blows antiseptic breezes

to lick away the mold

sucking away at the value

 

Someday I’ll take these dreams

and exchange them for a tomorrow

born in the bright yellow sunlight

of a new and different life

 

with no debts left to pay

against the principal

 

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  • Watuwant silver member
    September 7, 2007

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    Ahhh, this is a lovely poem. Kind of the whimsical musing I enjoy reading. Very nicely done.
    peace
    doug


  • Taranand
    August 31, 2007

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    Makes me want to give up my principals and become a wanton woman. Excellent imagery with a very edgey feeling. Great read. Love, Tara


  • Starswhispers silver member
    August 30, 2007
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    A very intense piece I love the metaphors and the imagery a truly wonderful poem I enjoy the reading
    and those 2 lines are amazing and full of emotion:

    "Someday I’ll take these dreams

    and exchange them for a tomorrow"

    Beautifully done. Thank you for entering my contest.





  • Kansas June
    August 30, 2007
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    still speechless

  • Kansas June
    August 30, 2007
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    I think this may be on of your best poems ever.


  • hungermuncher
    August 30, 2007

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    this is good i like the ideas it puts in me head and i havent really read anything else like this well done best of luck in the contest j

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