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Need To

I
I am confused
Fighting with you
Wanting to give in
Needing some blood
Skin cold with fear
Feel it when we touch
Outside I love you
But inside it'll grow

Can
You see it in me?
Skin warms with blood
Each day confronting
With what I have done
I pull the blade closer
You push it away
I tell you it's okay
I can't help but feel it flow...

(I hate you...)
Why can you love me?
(I love you..)
Why, I feel so helpless?
(Why is it you!)
Ripping your insides
Each time I love you
Why do you cry?
Why do you really need to?

Why!!
Bleed, you bitch!
Need to [x3]. . . fuck [x4]. . .

(I hate you...)
Why can you love me?
(I love you..)
Why, I feel so helpless?
(Why is it you!)
Ripping your insides
Each time I love you
Why do you cry?
Why do you fuckin' need to?

Author notes

Wasted Years

A contest entry

Remix of Korn's "Need To"; http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/korn/needto.html

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  • hardwire
    May 19, 2008
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    damn!!!

    that's intense!!!! confused me a little


  • XStuckInANightmareX
    August 30, 2007

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    This is good. I like it. I can kinda relate to some parts. Great job. Good luck in the contest. ILY. ♥


  • Angel Wing Disease
    August 30, 2007
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    This was very interesting.
    It's almost like you're going back and forth inside you're own mind fighting with yourself and just letting yourself go.
    Screaming into the night trying to find an answer.. I liked this poem a lot.
    Good luck in your contest.



    xx.

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