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Thoughts Unwound

A laugh, a smile
Talking for a while
Makes hearts sing
Thoughts spring
And run about my mind

A light, a sound
Something lost is found
I must find
Things kind
Now to ponder on

A day, a trend
Now is at an end
My life's change
Seems strange
Yet familiar at times

A chance, a game
Someone calls my name
My heart's song
Becomes strong
When life is rich and free

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  • Hebz
    September 18, 2007

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    WOW!!!

    Simple & amazing, I like the flow, the images, the words, everything...

    Thnx for entering & Best of Luck

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    Heba