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My Darling Dear~

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Fluent as your spirited psalms
cantillating whispers capture
my heartbeat inhales your sing-alongs

with sapphire eyes of laughter

 

Auburn swirls shift beneath a breeze

shelter found by crystalline streams

graceful glances under oak trees

reflecting off windows of dreams

 

Cinnamon kisses you bestow

renewing vows with tasteful touch

my inspiration as we grow

dear darling I love you so much

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Background by my sis. PerfectImperfection

For My Darling Spouse.. Going On 17 Years~
I Love You So Very Much. Picture Not Up To Date Yet.
Yes, She Changed Her Hair Color. Again. LOL!
Thanks For Loving Me For Me. Your Timothy~ xo

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 7, 2007

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    Bravo Tim,for the Poem....Love to you both!

    Ah, those smiles! What a lovely tribute of love to your wife, I can tell you love her so, and that is just wonderful...Your lovely imagery,beautiful rhyme,and flow added to that last line of endearment..That more men to proud to say it even privately, would, and publicly all the better! A Bravo here Tim for saying it in this poem....Just beautiful !


  • tara wilson gold member
    August 30, 2007

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    "Cinnamon kisses you bestow
    renewing vows with tasteful touch
    my inspiration as we grow
    dear darling I love you so much"

    Awww...this is SO beautiful!!!


  • PerfectImperfection
    August 30, 2007

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    Aww! Such a beautiful piece for your wife my dear!!! So very sweet, heart felt, and deeply romantic! This is just precious! You two are beautiful together!

    Much love!
    Wendy


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    August 30, 2007

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    What a beautiful dedication. Only love can inspire such loving words..I wish you many more years of love and happiness to the both of you..
    Soulful Woman


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    August 30, 2007

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    BREATH TAKING

    Cinnamon kisses you bestow renewing vows with tasteful touch my inspiration as we grow...sighs...So soft and tender are your words!...you both are so wonderfully lucky to have each other...Thanks my pet for sharing your love with me


  • Amera gold member
    August 30, 2007

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    Yet another tribute to your beautiful princess. Inspiringly lovely. IMHO, I would make one change; the word "thy" does not fit the rest of the modern language of the poem. I think simply using "your" would keep the read smooth in both flow and era. I really admire the love you have for her.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • pattyann4500
    August 30, 2007

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    Today is my husband's 58th birthday. He just gets better with age. This is very sweet. Isn't it wonderful to see a couple whose relationship had stood the stand of time. My very best to the two of you for many more years together. Hugs, Patricia


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    August 30, 2007

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    awww this was so beautifully written with such heartfelt emotion
    it was deep and powerful and she is one lucky person
    this was just beautiful
    well done


  • cherche -d -ame
    August 30, 2007

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    only you my dear and treasured [AP brother , friend and at times source of support and inspiration] could write such words and have them come across like you really mean them. I know you do and I wish you both the very best of the things that love can bring. Congratulations on your anniversary as well. It has been 20+ a couple years for me now....
    much love
    xoxoxoxoxo
    reenie


  • moon2u
    August 30, 2007
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    Sentimental Sweetness

    oh my gosh Timothy these are so sweet, I want to cry
    but happy tears...
    sis Moon


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 29, 2007

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    Ahhh, reading your words of love gives me hope that it's still out there for us lonely folk! This is beautiful Timothy, and I am sure she will cherish your words forever.

    Storm


  • poet2angels gold member
    August 29, 2007

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    So beautiful, Bro!
    I know how much in love you are and it is so wonderful to read such a beautiful display of affection for the ine you love ,,,
    As always, so amazing!
    Your Sis,,
    Lynda


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 29, 2007

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    Beautifully written dedication to your wife bro!
    I am sure that she will love this one when she sees it.
    Great job expressing your heart to her. Thanks for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826


  • Griswold silver member
    August 29, 2007

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    Beautifully written brother Timothy, and a beautiful wife you have as well. Many more years to come my friend... Scott


  • penman gold member
    August 29, 2007

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    Excellent

    Awww, such a beautiful and loving write. A wonderful expression of love for you wife. Truly is so touching. A gift from the heart that reallly is so special.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    August 29, 2007

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    This indeed was touching piece.
    Great job and beautiful picture,
    may God bless you through many more.
    Awesome job.
    Tory

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