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short breaths

I realized in the night I could have died,
  with liquored up tongues and vodka taste buds.
Roaring drunk laughter and my immortal eyes close in blood,
although it's not what it seems.
Drunken eyes whimpering between those yellow lines,
realizing with their stupid drunk words...
I am so fucked!

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