A beauty behind my brain,
Fleeing the scene of the crime,
A dark shadow follows,
A shadow of guilt,
It burns darkly,
And swallows all in it's path.
A bright blue blade shines ahead,
It's light pierces the artificial darkness,
I finally hold it,
And the shadows are banished to beyond mortal imagination.
Thunder booms,
Lighting slashes the ink black sky.
I now have that which I have longed for.
And It is a bliss unknown to most.
A contest entry
- Random Thoughts by Random Thoughts.
1000 points, ended September 23, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Nice imagery and wording, creating an almost fantasy feel to it,
Loads of intensity with a great message or outcome at the end, well done on a great poem and thankyou for you entry, good luck in this contest,
-Brenden -
I love your use of imagery.
"Lighting slashes the ink black sky"
Good luck in the contest. -
Ooooh I like this alot. I like the dark, mysterious feeling it holds. A great write, wishing you all the best in the contest.
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