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I Am

I am Artemis
The World grieves with me for what I have lost
The Heavens cry cold stinging tears to drench the Earth and cloak it in my misery
The winds howl my agony
The darkened sky rends itself to pieces in the face of my fury
And the light makes prisms of wonderous colour to distract me from my pain
I am Artemis
The World grieves with me for what I have lost

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  • crimsondew
    August 30, 2007
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    Loved the intensity of pain you portrayed...very well done without going overboard!


    • greyangel-artemis
      August 30, 2007
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      Thank you so much. I love getting commented and critiqued! Thanks for taking the time to read my poetry! (It's been a while since I have been active on this site, and I had about given up, honestly.) So it all means alot!
      ~Artemis

  • AstralPoet
    August 29, 2007
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    very good writing keep this up