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"Friends?"

If you were trying to make me cry
All your crap won't work
I'm stronger now
Isn't it obvious?
Never before would I have said
The things I said
Or done
The things I did
I laugh at your ignorance
I smile at your insults
And I am fully prepared to
Fight fire with fire
Watch out because here comes
The real me
Since I get to see the real you
And it's not so great
And if I am "falling all over you"
It's because your fake ego
Was so big
It tripped me
I only have one thing to say- to all of you






Get over yourself

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  • buddyboy
    January 14, 2008
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    Bull Crap

    You act like you're big and tough, but in reality you only would said
    "The things I said
    Or done
    The things I did
    I laugh at your ignorance
    I smile at your insults"
    On this site or on paper, you would never be like this in real life. So...


    Get over YOURself!


  • Papyrus
    October 23, 2007

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    you haven't posted anything in a while...how are you doing? n-e-way, I re-read this, and just liked it so much. chose your friends wisely, and don't worry, it's only high school...if you go to college (which I hope you do) you'll see the bigger picture, or at least not have to worry about crap like this so much. yeah, it feels good!

  • Papyrus
    September 23, 2007
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    it feels good to vent, doesn't it?


  • Bambaloo
    August 31, 2007
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    Hm.

    Seems like you put a lot of things into check for yourself. It's too bad I don't see it at all.

  • in-the-twilight
    August 31, 2007

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    OMG... This is Jackie... not even kidding you! Who did you write it for girl? Either way the two should be friends... they complete each other... xoxo meg


  • Doomsayer
    August 31, 2007

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    I like this alot. I really liked the lines "Since I get to see the real you/and it's not so great" Pure brilliance.


  • GuardianAngel3
    August 30, 2007
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    YOU GO GIRL!!!


  • Anubis1
    August 30, 2007
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    Wow. The real you?

    • WriteOrWrong597
      August 30, 2007
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      Like you would know. You weren't even mad at me 48 hours ago. What the hell?

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