a cross between the light and darkness
isn't much for mental sharpness
light is sight and sight is foul
we see as much as eats the owl
universe spreads within our hearts
this was expressed to us by the arts
demons controll the perception of mind
making us believe conjured stories behind
the self spreads beyond outer space
and all of our souls have more than one face
A contest entry
- Random Thoughts by Random Thoughts.
1000 points, ended September 23, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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DEEP,
What a very clever thought indeed,
I really enjoyed reading this one, I was able to interpret it several different ways, well done for sure,
Thanks for the entry and good luck in this contest,
-Brenden -
i like the "the self spreads beyond outer space
and all of our souls have more than one face"
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This poem kind of had a Macbeth thing to me..."fair is foul and foul is fair"
...at least that's what I thought about...intersting write
Good luck in the contest.
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