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Chado (The Way of Tea)

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Come to me
down winding way
hemmed with audience
of grayed rock faces,
glistening as ancient throng,
granting silent approval
of noble passing.
Step softly, dear one,
into the gentle garden
slender hands have tended
as years watched
the turning of supple soil,
rich with tender anticipation
of loftier coming.
Shed the dust of muddled earth,

at first,
in roji dew ground
where water sprinkles all
who enter quiet sanctuary

Walk to me

among flawless flowers, tall,
adorning narrow path
as nectared walls;   but stop

for moment’s cleansing
at tsukubai,

my bowl of stone laid low

and filled with purest fluid
to rinse the scent of brother’s blood
or hint of mired heart
from off your troubled hands

 

Follow me
across trickling stream
where bridge is belt
that joins jade flanks
of grassed kimono--
embroidered embankments of elegance

flowing in snapdragons, spilling fire,
and cherry blossoms glowing
in threads of silken string--
that lead to humble tea hut
where bonsai’s branches
bow in reverence.  
Bend with me, teishu, host;
pass low from knoll,

through needle’s eye of door
where stature matches
and humility speaks,

--silent, but heard--
Like decrees of hallowed scroll

(hung alone on alcove wall)

where bokuseki inscribed
an ancient writ
with calligriphy of the wise


Sit with me
upon tatami reeds
backs long and aligned
like stems of summer irises
ordered now, there in chosen vase,
our heads bent in reverent awe
like tiger lilies bowing
to raindrops.

Let us speak complete
of universe--
ladeled into bowl
sewn into cloth, and woven into fan.
Let us wonder together
you and I,
at kettle filled with watered yin, steaming,
and hearth inflamed with inscensed yang
filling hut with swirls of sandlewood
intoxicating,

inspiring

trained minds

Sip with me
the thick of koicha,
exalting it
upon left–armed pedestal,
and turning art of bowl’s adrorment
outward,
(as smile,

reflecting treasured heart's containment).
Then wipe with cloth
in practiced, mellow motion,
the warm residue of moistened lips
clinging yet to rim
like sap lingering upon maple garden's

seeping trunks.

And sip again,

of thinned usucha
whisked with bamboo-fingered chasin

to frothy green

that swallows soft,

as broth to nourish spirit. 

 

Breathe with me
the air of God
while mind infuses

perfect musings
and heart beats tunes
to streams of ripples
upon water and universe’s fabric,
learning the rhythmic swelling
of the path to hallowed Essence.

 

 

 

 

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  • Tangled Angle
    December 3, 2007

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    "from off your troubled hands"
    i'd remove from or off.


    Dang. This was.. -sigh-.
    Almost speechless basically.
    Excellent.


  • maa gold member
    September 11, 2007
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    this is exactly the kind of poem that would win gold in my occasional contests about "emptiness dancing", "unconditioned awareness", "cloudless consciousness" or call it whatever ...
    there is a handful of poets on ap who has the gift of touching my soul in a special way, and you are one of them ...

    much love,

    maa


  • Mirthryl
    September 10, 2007

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    I especially enjoyed the tsukubai washing, the needles eye of door (humility of stature), bowing tiger lilies, yin and yang, turning of bowl's adornment, wiping of bowl, breathing the air of God, and infused perfect musings.

    It was a long, slow write, the cadence perfect for the type of event you are portraying. Something to awaken the senses, be immersed in, absorb, and delicately savor. You have shared an experience, both graceful and ritual. Beautiful.


    • ten thousand cicadas gold member
      September 10, 2007
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      Thanks so much Diane, for your kind words. The tea ceremony is so beautiful. I would love to participate in one some day!


  • butterflywriter
    September 10, 2007
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    Beautiful...well deserved Gold!!!


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    September 10, 2007

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    At Lethbridge, Alberta, there is a Japanese Gardens and in the gardens is a pagody where you can sign up for a traditional tea ceremony. I have never seen such a ballet of movement. My son has worked and lvied in Japan for almost thirty years. I have a granddaughter named Kadi-Yumi and another, Sacora. My son is involved with an Elite English Immersion School system and bring students to Canada and the USA for 6 months of cultural imemrsion in a field they are interested in. Tis poem is full of what gentled my son, made him deeply spiritual and gave him a dinigty that has grown on him because of his cultural ethnic experiences there. Thank you for sharing this with me. It is so true to all I know of it. Even the wiping of the bowl...the way you explainw ithout lecture, the gracefulness of how surroundings and The One are in all things. Beautiful and breathtaking.


  • cutiepie gold member
    September 10, 2007

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    Many congratulations on the "Gold". This was a delightful journey into the Orient. Bravo


  • Everwind Rising
    September 10, 2007

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    Simply beautiful. What a lovely depiction of the tea ceremony. I saw it as I read it in all it's grace. Your imagery is vivid and drew me into the scene so completely. You similes and metaphors were done to great effect and all fit the spirit of the ceremony very well. I like how you brought out the spiritual/philosophical elements of the tea ceremony as well. Wonderfully written piece.


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    September 9, 2007

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    Beautifully written, a wonderful traditional tea with vibrant and captivating imagery. Great write. Hugs, Bunny

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