A deadly sort of stare
Had pierced through the air.
I felt the desire on her face,
She wanted to know how I taste.
Though I loved her so deep,
I felt only the passion in need.
She spoke her mind out loud
And said she wanted me right now.
When words are so hypnotic
I begin to go neurotic,
Although we stood before a nun,
I wasted no time to suck her tongue.
After a few moments of love,
I became truthfully drunk.
I am one of those hopeful romantics,
Delivering my darling the sweetest know antics.
I will go through any shenanigan,
Just to hear her laugh again.
Something about the way she smiles
Just seems to drive me wild.
Shes the reason
I continue breathing,
She arouses my eyes,
Like pleasure for my seeing.
Now I understand the prayers that I have,
And want to put a ring upon her hand.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A sweet and touching write. The rhythm and rhyme is well done, except close to the end, it changes abruptly which interupts it a bit. Overall, it's very well done.
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This is beautiful. It has a great flow and lots of imagery and passion. Especially liked the ending. So romantic. Keep up the good work.
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