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Forgotten Mist

You remember me
But forget who I was
And what I once meant.
You look me in the eyes
And see blue irises with wide pupils
But stop there.
Not long ago though,
You would search beyond my every wall
To see the real me.
Now, you just don’t care.
You remember our fights
And a few good times
But nothing like I do.
Those late night walks
And midnight movies are at the back of your mind.
My memory of you is as living as life
But your memory of me
Is just mist under the moon;
Unforgettable until you look away.

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  • HeavenScent4U
    November 19, 2007

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    this one, (i feel like a broken record here)just tears me up. how can anyone not be able to see how wonderful you are? if they cannot appreciate you, it is there loss, try hard not to take it to heart. be well and be blessed