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Distracted

I've been so distracted,
I can't keep focused.
My mind keeps on drifting,
And my thoughts are of you.

Flowers bloom in fields,
A bouquet is picked for me,
And their we lay for hours,
Watching the clouds float above.

Waves crashing upon the shore,
Sand is between our toes,
Our laughter fills the air,
Your hand gripping mine.

And right as we're about to kiss,
I snap back to the present,
With nothing left of that moment,
Except for the aching in my heart.

Author notes

another crush poem. i dont actually think in those images but the thoughts do sound nice, don't they? hope you enjoy.

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  • warrior-eagle
    September 15, 2007
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    lol yes the thoughts do sound nice,nice poem