In ten minutes I can have my arms around you,
my fingers typing a gentle hello on your back;
In twenty my smooth glossed lips can be on your shoulder,
whispering soft words of comfort in the crook of your neck.
In half of an hour my hair can be brushing your cheek,
tickling the sweet spot below your ear;
In fourty minutes my scent can be woven into your collar,
swirling up into your pours and caressing your senses.
In fifty minutes I can have you dancing to no music,
trapped in the gleam the moon shines into my eyes;
In sixty minutes- one hour- maybe less...
I can mean something to you.
Do you have the time?
A contest entry
- If you had me alone for an hour... by Dorcha Runda.
450 points, ended September 15, 2007, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - POETRY MONTH! by WesBreezyxxx.
300 points, ended April 21, 2008, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow!! I love how you've broken the hour up into segments it is an amazing write!
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haha! it is so strange how you and i think alike! I still think yours is better than mine, because you go through the minutes up to an hour. I love it! and I love you!
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awww!!!!! i like it
great continuity!
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wow. this is a beautiful write. The whole piece flowed so smoothly and in balance to the emotions and meaning behind the piece. wow. really. just wow. breathtaking.
goodluck in the contest
All the best
~Hollow~
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Thank you a bunch for the comment; I'm glad it struck you so nicely
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oh wow this is so amazing.....idk what else to say....i love the last line...just brilliant. Thanks for your entry love and good luck.
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