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the peace flag of redemption

red white and blue
it's just for me and you

white stars on the side
brings tears to your eyes

thirteen stripes in a line
makes you wish no one would die

red on the flag
shall not be blood shed in war

peace and unity is what makes the nation
so united we stand and divided we fall

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    August 29, 2007

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    very nice. Simple and direct. I like this very much. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck.
    Brian