you never tried
to understand why
my lifes a living hell
i cant escape it
every day
it gets harder
to understand myself
why am i living?
i know if i'm around
i'll take the knife
and bleed the pain
this world will never be
where i'm meant to be
i'm not like any of you
i never will be
i'm me
i always will be
you never felt real pain
try being me for a hour
then maybe you will understand
i'm not like any of you
i'm a monster
and i swear
if you mess with me again
i will kill you
there are few
who i trust
who i let in
they are the ones
who understand
all the rest of you
leave me alone
for i control hell now
i'm the one you will answer to
the little girl in the dark
the corner of the classroom
quiet with a pen in her hand
let her be
that little girl is me
Author notes
sister, lunagirl15
A contest entry
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Ok so you spelled answer in one of your lines wrong. Good job and wonderful write.
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Well expressed and written.Thanks for entering
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Wow...this poem is overflowing with emotion, I can really relate to what this poem says, the fractured lines help to show what the girl is thinking even more. Well done =]
Can you please put your username and what part of my AP Family you want to be in your Author Notes please?
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Very nice. I can feel the raw emotion, something not all poems accomplish. Great job!
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im sorry about ur bad week. we all have bad weeks. [im having a bad semester! so far] ihope things work out for you
and thanks so much for entering my contest
get happier soon! ^_^
<3
~dani
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