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Etched Mutilation

Names written on her arm
Wings on her back that could have been of an angels
Her torso a daze of colours
Tattoos weaved themselves on her curves
Cracking her skin deep,
The lethal ink, poisoning
Her voice only beckoned out for more
Exquisite body mutilation,
Snakes gripped her ankles
Breathing piece of art


Author notes

I suppose tattoos are pretty but they can also be quite ugly.

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  • Game Master
    August 29, 2007

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    That was something new, very very interesting I like ur comment that was very funny to me. Good job and good luck


  • Jfd
    August 29, 2007
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    Great Job, I enjoyed your imagery...thanks for entering

  • EdibleRoses
    August 29, 2007

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    Wow

    Oh, WOW. I really like this. Not too long, beautiful word choice...The title made me interested...Amazing imagery...Amazing job.