Believe
I won't let you fall away
And when your eyes water from that swollen heart
Believe I'm here to stay
I'll never let you fall away
And when you think all hope is lost
Believe you'll see a brighter day
'Cause I'm not lettin' you fall away
No, not today
Not when I can see tomorrow
Not when we're so close we can taste the promise
I promise
You'll always have me here
To keep you standing strong and sound
I'm gonna hold you near
I swear
And when there's no other way
When all that we can do is pray
Still, I won't let you fall away
And when you feel like you're slipping
Believe I'll catch you any day
Just wait and see
You can trust me when I say
Believe
Trust that I will never EVER leave
And that's my word
Believe in me
A contest entry
- I won't let you fall away. (Quotes and Titles) by Restless and True.
450 points, ended September 12, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn your Green Trophies into Bronze, Silver or Gold (3) by FloridaGatorQueen.
600 points, ended July 22, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PRE-WRITES WANTED by echo-ink.
700 points, ended August 5, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is such a sweet poem. I love the positive message you wrote here. One thing we need in this life is trust. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Amazing
I loved this. I could feel the emotion coming through.
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I love this. It shows your unconditional love for this person. It is a really great write.
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GREAT!!
that was awsome!i love your poems :]] -
this is such a beautiful poem! reminds me of my very best friend! thankyou for writting such an amazing poem!
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The repitition of "fall away" made me think how hard you want to hold on to the subject of this poem. Nice job. Keep writing.
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ROCKIN!
awesome bud!
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this is a brilliant write. its dead sweet. I love it.
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That's really sweet :-) Give that to a sweet lover of yours and I bet they will be wooed!
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I love how you used the title of my contest in your poem. It's one of my favorite songs (Oh Star by Paramore). This was a great piece.
~SweetAmber~
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