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Passion (duh)

I have this passion within me
A constant kindling fire
But its locked behind glass
and I wish to draw it from me
like tinsel from my chest
A flourish of speckled colours.
It coils itself around me
Like requited passion
And a lovers arms.
The princess of emotions
Bound to no fool nor king
Passion is my talent and
that alone...

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Different for me, but it just came out when I was doodling.

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  • Bitter Kold
    September 5, 2007

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    Definitely different but, catchy. Your previous works makes this one stand out because of the contrast. Kind of like the one-milky-white contact and your natural eye colour. The contrast makes either more appealing. Great write.