A desert.
The nothingness sea.
Air echoing through silence itself.
Silent.
Lonely.
Inexistent.
At my front, emptiness.
At my back, memories.
It’s all said and done.
Over.
Condemned to be,
In the void of being.
Breathing.
Feeling.
Dreaming,
Fallen of grace,
Turned into pain.
Living.
Dying.
Leaving.
Fading lights like
Disappearing hopes.
Broken bonds.
Love.
Lies.
Life.
Author notes
lost love
A contest entry
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450 points, ended September 11, 2007, 28 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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This is a sad poem about lost love. Love the way it is so full of feeling and sadness. Great read and good luck in the contest!
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I like it.
I don't think that the title quite fits though, and I'm not seeing what the centered formatting is adding to the piece. I think it would do better left aligned.
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I like this. I personally don't think the title fit. But the poem itself was awesome. I like the poem but I think a different title would fit better.
Anyhoo, I loved this poem. It had a deep meaning and described your feeling very well. Good luck! -
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yeah, i was thinking about the title, but I couldnt find any title that I could relate with the poem so well, so I chose one with at least a word mentioned. I`ll think about the title, and name it differently, but it could well end up as "untitled"
thanks for your comment
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